The way you drew Yveltal's left wing is odd. Now don't get angry over this, but it does. Why does it look like if it was screwed backwards? And its wings are very short compared to the tail. As I remember Sugimori's official artwork of it and the trailer, the wings and the tail are all supposed to be exactly the same size.
That's the only thing that surprised me on the way you drew Yveltal's wings. Overall, a nice piece. You could have done better on the emphasis a bit, but overall, it's nice and pretty good. It fits with the whole theme of it flying in the calm darkness. owo Remember to check back on the anatomy a bit more.
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The way you drew Yveltal's left wing is odd. Now don't get angry over this, but it does. Why does it look like if it was screwed backwards? And its wings are very short compared to the tail. As I remember Sugimori's official artwork of it and the trailer, the wings and the tail are all supposed to be exactly the same size.
That's the only thing that surprised me on the way you drew Yveltal's wings. Overall, a nice piece. You could have done better on the emphasis a bit, but overall, it's nice and pretty good. It fits with the whole theme of it flying in the calm darkness. owo Remember to check back on the anatomy a bit more.
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