the abs look like bubbles, try making them flatter on the top, and a little closer together in the center. thats really the only none awesome thing. you did really good with the folds in the clothing
>.< yush I know they look like bubbles XD though they r better then the ones i drew before- im gonna keep practicing on that cuzz thats maybe the hardest part when drawing for me =////= and thanx :') I was aware they were to far away from eachother o.= like the abs- but i was sooooo tired that I didnt have the pacience to change them xD
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